Suddenly his grip on my hand tightened, and he pulled me closer, his warm breaths against my cheek and the smell of his cologne thickened in the air, to whisper, 'I wish time would stop now, at this moment, when I am still in control of myself and the madness you have driven me to, so I could be silently crazy about you for all eternity. But it won't ever, and I'd be crazy about you anyway as long as I'm still breathing, I'm sorry if this will break your heart, I promise to God I'll mend it flawless, I promise to God I'd keep it safe.'
And his lips met mine for a thousand summers.
20 scribbleback (s):
Awww, that's cute. You have a knack for writing cuteness.
Does this come from a longer piece or do you usually write short, in-the-moment passages?
aisya - thanks. *blushes pink ngade2* that's so kind of you.
this one comes from a 6-page piece. a short story i wrote in my days as a creative writing club member back then. =) about a blind girl who wanted to see colors.
and yeah i usually write short in-the-moment passages, too. hehe.
I still have to read the last Ig and Nina bit you posted...
When you gonna publish the whole thing already? Malas nak tunggu! Sakit hati, tau, when we syok2 baca, and then we have to wait til who knows when for the next bit! BENCI!
:P
owh, cerita ini. saya sudah baca dan mengalirkan air mata XDDD <-- font size 100!
kak aisya d atas sana, sabarrr ^^ hehe
aisya - aiyo..you got me laughing hard!! haha. sorry. i pun sakit hati jugak that i can't publish the whole thing sebab i don't have the whole thing. i also benci the fact that i have to keep people waiting, you know. >< if it's stressful on the readers, it's a billion times more stressful on me. but it keeps me going. i thank everyone for that. sangat. taktau mcm mana nk apologize dah. adeh.
adinda - teruk gila komen. XDD
Oooh ooh sorry! Didn't mean to stress you out!
Takpe, I'll wait patiently then. :D
aisya - i know you didn't. i'll try my best. XD it's hard when you're working. one of the readers had already told me to quit teaching. lol. takleh blah.
Nana, i heart this:))
Urm, i mean Nani... see, i got u guys mixed-up again.
Kak Nani adalah awesomeness! Ada perasaan yang masih membuak buak nak keluar. Tapi tak boleh dinyatakan dalam bentuk perkataan. haha! Nak cerita penuh!!
oh Nani...please reveale who is dis guy...i'm dying of guessing.T__T
again.awesome!
ops.reveal.no e..:D
eh lagi..:D
Owh..i thought this is Ig n Nina….sorry…but. This is also a mystery…berdebar2 mahu tahu siapakah empunya diri. :D
That's really sweet.Is it a dream? short story?
she-gnome - thank you~!
luna - omg thank you. mcm sgt warm and keju cair all of the sudden. XD hehe. that's very nice of you. cerita penuh i kena consider dulu, sbb in Word je dh six pages. hehe.
kak inna - his name is Azul.
munsyi - it's a short story. =)
how can lips meet for 1000 summers? haha just kidding.
that is cute and beautifully written :)
brenda - use glue. XD
zuhana - thank you!
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